If you overlook the fact that the theme is morose and depressing, I really liked it. The lines on the greeting card and beauty contestants was nice. But I do find it fascinating that a person who is so full of life and laughter can have such deep dark thoughts about the world ending.

That amazing, again i just think abt it n this is what comes to my mind.. it sure doesn't help me think that its ur debut effort.. Keep it up..

I agree with Anusha over there.. especially the thing about love being on greeting cards and world peace in minds of beauty contestants is so true! And also never thought u would pen such a song.. of what ever I know u. Great going!! keep writing..

U forced me to write this :-)) Song written very very very well....but its too dark. U r a very optimistic person naa......to aise likhke u scare me :-)) Good song writing skills :-)) Maybe become a lyricist???? give it a thought ;-))